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    Country Wisdom

    lime rock dust
    rises
    in the breeze
    settles
    far and wide along flowered weedy paths
    clings
    to surfaces waiting for wiping

    well-worn driveway
    leading
    out to wider world

    we
    stay
    cocooned in possibility
    dreaming
    happy tales

    everything
    stands
    temporary: temple mounds & calendar blocks

    dust to dust
    wins

    every time

  • #2
    Top of the queue RLW.

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  • #3
    Minimal words, maximal impact. OutSTANDING.

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  • #4
    this is great every word has impact

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  • #5
    Are you playing with a new structure RLW? The feeling to me is a pot pourri of zen and western thinking. It has a strength about it.

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    • RhymeLovingWriter
      RhymeLovingWriter commented
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      Thanks LG. I lost my voice this past week due to coughing so much. Maybe this is how it translates in writing?

  • #6
    Oh no! I hope ur feeling better

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    • RhymeLovingWriter
      RhymeLovingWriter commented
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      Thanks. A little. Not sounding better yet, but hopefully on the mend.
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