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    Bone Moon Hunger Moon

    When the moon and winter part
    we sip bone marrow soup
    and search the skies
    for an excipient
    in the night's frigid reticula.

    Moon swallows her tears
    spilling only snow and beauty
    along the margins
    of hunger's shrinking expansions.

    We swallow our tears
    chinks of grace
    to blossom in spring.
    Last edited by lunar glide; 02-12-2017, 06:40 PM.

  • #2
    Did not know Reticula had an astronomical significance until I went to look it up. Incredible language here lunar glide. It floats above me like as astral projection, then settles in hope for a new day.

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    • #3
      Thanks RLW! I appreciate your visit

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      • #4
        I second RLW about reticula... nice job Lunar Glide!

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        • lunar glide
          lunar glide commented
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          Thanks Imrogue

      • #5
        Sheer magic of lunar wordcraft here, O Selenophilus. Meticulous concepts, from winter to the grace of spring via bone marrow soup, snow, and tears.

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        • lunar glide
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          Thank you Grant! Concept is what I strive for in words so I truly appreciate that comment!

      • #6
        Many Moons Ago there was a poet named Lunar Glide who could extract the bone and marrow out of the moon. What's next LG? Can't wait.

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        • lunar glide
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          Thank you Bobby! Only two more moons to go and I will give it a rest 😋

      • #7
        Very Nice! Spring is coming

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        • lunar glide
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          Yes it is LD 😀

      • #8
        Hello lunar glide, A beautiful snow moon melting into spring in this passage of elegant verse. Your style and wit, most unusual, absorbing and a complete pleasure to read. Excellent indeed. Regards, Tony.

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        • #9
          Thank you Tony! Im happy you enjoyed it.

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          • #10
            The mmoon is always turned into elegant word art. You have a skill with words

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            • #11
              Thank you kindly Pp. And likewise 😋

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