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    You Remembered (inspired by Rhymetime and Darthvader's poems)
    By: Imrogue

    You remembered to give me warmth when I am cold.
    You remembered to cover me when rain followed.

    You remembered lifting the rain; flooding at bay.
    You remembered coloring blue sky instead grey.

    You remembered to shower the world your grace.
    You remembered to forgive me with tight embrace.

    You remembered to stay with me when I am down.
    You remembered to soothe my woes during meltdown.

    You remembered to fix all things when disarray.
    You remembered to guide me when I've lost my way.

    You remembered to walk with me in my shadow.
    You remembered to light my way, I truly know.

    You remembered to speak with me in your own way.
    You remembered to speak aloud to hear you say:

    "You have not chosen Me, but I have chosen you..."
    Last edited by imrogue; 02-05-2017, 06:34 AM.

  • #2
    Hi, This is beautiful and presented so that the words simply flow easily throughout.
    I especially love the last line "You have not chosen Me, But I have chosen you.."

    Thank you so much for sharing this with us.

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    • imrogue
      imrogue commented
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      You are welcome but this poem was inspired by one of yours so, I Thank you too! 😊

  • #3
    A memorable write imrogue. Kudos to you rhymetime and Darth!

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    • imrogue
      imrogue commented
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      Thanks for reading and for your comment!

  • #4
    I enjoyed this write Its structure facilitated its flow and suited its messge

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    • imrogue
      imrogue commented
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      Thanks for reading and for your nice comment! 😊

  • #5
    I particularly enjoyed these lines:

    You remembered to walk with me in my shadow.
    You remembered to light my way, I truly know.

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    • imrogue
      imrogue commented
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      Thank you Tanner! I'm glad you enjoyed it!

  • #6
    Hello imrogue, A wise choice indeed. A lovely melody to this one, reads like a spiritual chant. I enjoyed it no end. Regards, Tony.

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    • imrogue
      imrogue commented
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      Thanks for reading Tony! I appreciate your generous compliment!☺️

  • #7
    This gratitude touches me, this joyful remembrance embraces me. A wonderfully expressed poem, imrogue. Thank you for this blissful melody.

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    • imrogue
      imrogue commented
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      Thanks for the inspiration! 😊 I'm glad you liked it!

  • #8
    To be remembered - is the greatest gift.

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    • rhymetime
      rhymetime commented
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      Indeed it is.
      I think of a song that always makes me cry- Sarah McLaughlin, "I Will Remember You"

  • #9
    Thanks for reading and for your comment! 😊

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    • #10
      Thanks for reading and liking mutado! 😊

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