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  • The glance

    If you ever knew how much I love you

    I know I will never make you blue

    Without you I would be nothing

    And my heart will stop rushing

    Everyday I glance and see you

    I would know our love will always be true

    My love for you I know its hard to find

    But one day I would only want you as mind

    In my mind you are one gorgeous women

    And I know our life together could be all written

    One of these days I will have to come out and say

    Please let me love you and please stay

    I know our two hearts will never break

    All I want is be there when you awake

  • #2
    Originally posted by Tonysp View Post
    If you ever knew how much I love you (if you knew how much I love you?)

    I know I will never make you blue (--see how knew & know don't work together, because of different tenses. I have always had problems with that, too. it bothered me but I figure I can always edit; or see what I thinknit might mean...)

    Without you I would be nothing (without you I am nothing?)
    I too also want a world where hearts don't metaphorically break.
    a strong world!

    thanks for sharing, Tonysp...

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