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    One day
    you'll cinch the old tenderness
    of the American Flag
    to your chest once again
    you'll feel the warm hand
    of liberty once again.

    America will resemble
    her dream once again
    with another dark tear memory
    of herself so like unlike herself
    and what should never have been forgotten
    at empty tables.

    One day
    your children will so softly
    feel the flag with fingers
    without demands
    and touch no seams of skin.
    Last edited by lunar glide; 01-31-2017, 05:00 AM.

  • #2
    Whoa! Depicting the promise and regret of The American Dream. Amazing LG!

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      Thank you Bobby!

  • #3
    Beautifully worded. I hope you are the prophetic poet whose utterances come true!

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    • lunar glide
      lunar glide commented
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      Thank you RLW. I think Dwayne is the prophetic poet 😊 but i did venture away from nature at least .

  • #4
    Beautifully conceived and wrought. This insightful piece should be published.

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    • lunar glide
      lunar glide commented
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      Thank you Grant! Poetry may be a component to solving the spreading problem of increased fear.
      Last edited by lunar glide; 01-31-2017, 11:42 AM.

  • #5
    Lunar this is fantastic great concept majestic execution

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      Thank you for such high praise😀
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