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    Happy, as a hamster in a wheel
    Cycles, pedaling not to feel
    Detached , ismy life real
    Jump, should I close the deal.
    Guilt, suffocates, air steal
    Layers, onion cry as I peel
    Bipolar, never end never heal
    Cycles, pedaling not to feel
    Happy, as a hamster on a wheel

  • #2
    Hello Parkinsonspoet, A whirl of happiness and its opposites in sharp, effective language and deftly applied poetics. Well done. Regards, Tony.

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    • #3
      Jon, this is almost a meet in the middle reverso - I like the way you run the range of emotions in so few lines. Good stuff!

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      • #4
        The poem resembles the wheel! A hampster waltz. Well done!

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