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    Planet of "The Ates"

    The poet writes to resonate
    lawyers and judges litigate
    The politician creates debate
    the detective must investigate

    The psychic will predict your fate
    while the guru sits and meditates
    The skater twirls on ice with skates
    well done steak takes time, so wait

    Parents have so much on their plate
    they teach their kids to contemplate
    how to live life compassionate
    so they will one day be great


    Teenagers kiss on their first date
    too young to see life's complicate
    eventually reveal their feelings innate
    a lasting love they consecrate

    To ourselves we should obligate
    live our lives in a happy state
    Trains at the station don't be late
    so much in life to appreciate


  • #2
    This is Great!

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    • #3
      Im coming back to this. It could really be a song.

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      • #4
        I can't believe we 'ate' the whole thing - life that is.

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        • #5
          lunar glide thank you for your exuberant comments and interest. I am listening for the melody and ya never know!

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          • #6
            RhymeLovingWriter sorry I'm L-ate, your response is on point as usual!

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            • #7
              Bravo ! Sir !

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              • #8
                Hello Bobby, The story of life in splendid rhythm and rhyme. Enjoyed this one very much. Well done indeed. Regards, Tony.

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                • #9
                  Tony Grannell a special compliment from "The Simple Man" thank you sir!

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                  • #10
                    Awesome as always! So clever the "Ates"

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                    • #11
                      LovesDaisies thank you and I Celebr-ate our friendship.

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                      • #12
                        Bobby I can substantiate , even though I'm late, it is my fate to confirm poem is great

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                        • #13
                          I'll take "ates" over"ism's" any day.

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