Watching

[Parkinsonspoet]

Watched on the ouside
Watched on the inside?
I sense ,Who spies?
Whose eyes?
What guise?

I hear but whose here?
Eye of the storm of gossip
Whispers,shout
Ego doubt
Self flout

Brifght inner light
Or reflection
Tablets rattle
Pill prattle
Mind chattel

Watches for watchers
Time tolls,but who pays
Inner orb
Demon daubs
Fear absorbs

[Tony Grannell]

Hello Parkinsonspoet, From the ominous to inner fear expressed with poetic skill and deep understanding. Leaves the reader uncomfortable so powerful and true are your words. Excellent! Regards, Tony.

[RhymeLovingWriter]

Woe to anyone already given to paranoia Parkinsonspoet. This could send him or her straighter to the edge. Reminiscent of Rockwell's "Somebody's Watching Me".

[Parkinsonspoet]

Tony Grannell RhymeLovingWriter My tablets can have the side effect of paranoia-the more you think of it the more you wonder. Thank you for your kind comments

[The second]

P Poet Yes this is stirring! Cold hearted orb that rules the night, removes the colors from our sight.(MOODY BLUES) often the demons visit me. Thank You for your endless flow!