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    Watched on the ouside
    Watched on the inside?
    I sense ,Who spies?
    Whose eyes?
    What guise?

    I hear but whose here?
    Eye of the storm of gossip
    Whispers,shout
    Ego doubt
    Self flout

    Brifght inner light
    Or reflection
    Tablets rattle
    Pill prattle
    Mind chattel

    Watches for watchers
    Time tolls,but who pays
    Inner orb
    Demon daubs
    Fear absorbs

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    Hello Parkinsonspoet, From the ominous to inner fear expressed with poetic skill and deep understanding. Leaves the reader uncomfortable so powerful and true are your words. Excellent! Regards, Tony.

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    • #3
      Woe to anyone already given to paranoia Parkinsonspoet. This could send him or her straighter to the edge. Reminiscent of Rockwell's "Somebody's Watching Me".

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      • #4
        Tony Grannell RhymeLovingWriter My tablets can have the side effect of paranoia-the more you think of it the more you wonder. Thank you for your kind comments

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          P Poet Yes this is stirring! Cold hearted orb that rules the night, removes the colors from our sight.(MOODY BLUES) often the demons visit me. Thank You for your endless flow!
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