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    A puddle is deep
    As a human steep

    What is contained
    Never unchained

    Standing sleepless
    Is the reflex

    All surroundings
    Similarity abounding

    Every puddle
    Part of the same huddle.


    I would be glad to receive feedback on my poem! Thanks for your time, have a great day!

  • #2
    enjoyable, as it was concise. I am one who loves images, but they have their place, too. the echo of the puddle, the beginning shift of syntax ... left more room to ponder what I see

    thankya, CoolBreeze...

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