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    Flayed bare her branches
    of rusted leaves
    to creaking winds
    and I wrapping my
    arms around her
    like old bark
    around a hollow tree.

  • #2
    Stunning imagery here Tony! Sad - and understandable. My condolences.

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    • Tony Grannell
      Tony Grannell commented
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      Hello RhymeLovingWriter, No need for condolences, thank God, a work of fiction.Your response is very much appreciated and cherished. Regards, Tony.

  • #3
    So sad Tony! Short but affecting poem.

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    • Tony Grannell
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      Hello imrogue, Once again I do thank you very much, you are most kind. Regards, Tony

  • #4
    Aaah Tony. The wrapping arms like bark, the hollow tree, what beautiful deep connections you make.

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    • Tony Grannell
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      Hello lunar glide, The bark and the hollow tree, the dying comforting the dying in the winter of their lives. Your response is very much appreciated. Regards, Tony.

  • #5
    Beautifully timeless English in this gem of sorrow, Tony. Salutes!

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    • #6
      Hello grant, Delighted you enjoyed this one and I am somewhat humbled by your salutes. Thank you very much. Regards, Tony.

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      • #7
        Eloquent. Both literal and metaphoric.

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        • Tony Grannell
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          Hello Dwayne, Thank you very much, very kind of you indeed. Regards, Tony.

      • #8
        Emotive, bare, and it pierces me! I values the economy of words, yo.

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        • Tony Grannell
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          Hello amenOra, Most kind of you to respond and it is very much appreciated. Regards, Tony.
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