Some prodigal spark

[grant hayes]

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[Bobby Del Boy]

You're stretching my brain Grant. Sorry, that's all I got!

[grant hayes]

No worries, Bobby; it's not everyone's cup of tea. ☺

[Parkinsonspoet]

As a cup f tea it is definitely from a fine blendno dded sugar will be required-seems to me a beautiful description of a lover watched while asleep. If there is more or I have missed the point please enlighten me

[grant hayes]

Spot on, Parkinsonspoet ☺

[RhymeLovingWriter]

Now that's some luxurious poetry right there Mr. Hayes. Yes it IS!!!!

[grant hayes]

A luxury I cannot afford, perhaps, Rhymist.

[Tony Grannell]

Hello grant, A beautiful portrait of a reclining goddess. Stylish, moving and poetic. Regards, Tony.

[grant hayes]

I have actually painted with words, at last, it would seem, Tony. I am glad you could see as I saw.

[lunar glide]

I was expecting this piece to be combustible but it's so smooth the words are almost melted or mixed like paint. Real artwork.

[grant hayes]

It was the work of my morning train ride, lunar glide. I was pleased that a poem formed before me, rather than the typical box of odds and ends. ☺

[rhymetime]

Wow. I find myself standing by the bed in filtered Sunlight staring at beauty beyond my deserving and I smile

[grant hayes]

Ah, we see alike, rhymetime!

[The second]

I was caught in a sand storm of poetry and suffocated]. Zesta Returned!!!

[grant hayes]

I've heard that my pieces exert that suffocating effect, The second. Maybe asthma taught me, and I haven't known.

[The second]

No!!!, for me your Poetry breathes! My son is an athlete and has asthma. He has been on inhaler meds since he was four. I love your stuff