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    My conscience flickers
    In life's wind
    Dancing for its dinner
    To the playlist
    Of my emotions

    Guilt pride all hide
    As I dowse for
    The water of my soul
    Boiled away by anger
    But restored as it cools

    My soul no longer pure
    Its cherry consumed
    By living
    Shows a rainbow
    Of forgiveness

    My sinful reign
    My inner light
    Processed by understanding
    Makes my soul
    Treasure at its end.

    Inspired by AnatoliyS
    Last edited by Parkinsonspoet; 01-21-2017, 05:07 AM.

  • #2
    This is very beautiful, one of the purest, most honest poems I've read in a while, Jon! You have wonderfully caught many important parts of a spiritual path leading us unto the Inner Light:
    Guilt pride all hide...
    Soul boiled away by anger...
    My soul ... shows a rainbow of forgiveness...
    Processed by forgiveness makes my soul treasure at its end.
    Truly wonderfully done!

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    • Parkinsonspoet
      Parkinsonspoet commented
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      Thank you your poem focussed my mind on some thoughts of my own, but this poem would not exist without yours

  • #3
    I agree with AnatoliyS - this is wonderful Parkinsonspoet. It sounds a deeper vibe than your usual fare - and I can see the interplay between your work. This is one of the things that makes me happiest about the zone - how we learn and grow and are inspired by one another!

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    • Parkinsonspoet
      Parkinsonspoet commented
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      I agree it is great to see how someone else addresses the same idea

    • RhymeLovingWriter
      RhymeLovingWriter commented
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      Reading this again - directly after luxuriating in Grant's piece A Prodigal Spark - is leaving me a little breathless in the zone. So many gorgeous words to soothe the soul. Huzzah! I thank you again.

  • #4
    A touching meditation, Parkinsonspoet, beautifully spare.

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