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    List-less

    Perhaps it’s not been good
    to venture forth without a plan.
    Such slothful will, defined
    or ill, finds naught to follow…
    every effort starts to
    stall in different
    hall of fame; no blame.
    Except for paltry piles
    instead of miles plopped
    far ahead of where
    the mound was meant to be.
    If I’d have found just
    one completion sign,
    the road to ‘done’
    would rest much easier
    on eyes rolled languid
    past another day.

  • #2
    I know the feeling but better to be listless than wordless

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    • RhymeLovingWriter
      RhymeLovingWriter commented
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      Too true! Thank you for the lovely reminder!

  • #3
    Hello RhymeLovingWriter, From paltry piles come mighty mountains and be done with languid days as this poem, this plan of yours has cried, begone! 'Listless, the title but the poem itself well laden with energy and an active mind. All is well between the lines, untangling oneself from the cobwebs of the blues, as it were and another day, another poem 'done' and very well done indeed. Regards, Tony.

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    • RhymeLovingWriter
      RhymeLovingWriter commented
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      Thank you Tony - so nicely reassuring. Perhaps today will hold more focus!

  • #4
    Reminds me of all the tasks I start but have yet to complete through distraction. I then get annoyed with myself but you have perhaps allowed your mind to wander and COMPLETED this wonderful poem. Thank you

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    • RhymeLovingWriter
      RhymeLovingWriter commented
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      Thank you! It probably helped that I was at the end of the day and wanted to go to sleep too!
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