Day break and death

[The second]

DAYBREAK AND DEATH

Daybreak came
I was not with her
To a more vivid dream, I clung
No more mornings, gray
In between shadows
Only the sun
I prayed be this way
Heart and breath sleeping
My dream had not been stung
Endless fields
Goldenrod the Mantis
Milkweed the Monarch
Forever
A child will run

RDS
THE SECOND

[grant hayes]

I can't explain why, but this got tears from me.

[The second]

Grant you have become a physical untouched friend!!!!!! I see you on the train

[grant hayes]

I am on the train most days, the second; one of those tap-tapping on a phone. Mayhap I am reading a poem by .... the second.

[lunar glide]

this is incredible TS. your poetry often hits like a tsunami but this one immortal.

[RhymeLovingWriter]

This is so very beautiful TS. It leaves me wishing you only the sweetest dreams - ever.

[DWAYNE]

Emotive. Beautiful flow.

[The second]

Thank You for the Kind words!

[Suz-zen]

THIS!!!!!

Goldenrod the Mantis
Milkweed the Monarch
Forever
A child will run

Bravo to you The second for another deeply moving piece.

[The second]

Suz-Zen Thank You for reading and commenting!