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    FINAL PUSH

    I turn her sails to catch the wind
    A dancing horizon
    Glorious sunset
    Ocean receiving
    New strength found
    With our wake
    Homeward bound
    A final push I make

    RDS
    THE SECOND

  • #2
    Beautiful flow here TS - very hopeful and uplifting!

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    • #3
      T Y RLW As always your replies are like spiders catching flies. Thank You again and hope you are well also!!

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      • #4
        Even though I do not sail your words take me ther thank you

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        • #5
          I can feel the cool breeze on my face. Another fine write TS

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          • #6
            I suppose one could interpret this as literal or metaphorical. Perhaps you meant it as both. I am struck by the metaphorical. One more time, one more chance, then...
            Love it

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            • #7
              TY Poet Friends for comments Both lit and met, sailing to an end fast and with strength.

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