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    To love is to breathe
    Lungs full soul inhales
    Oxygen needed
    To scale loves peak

    Breathe deeoly
    Breathe calmly
    Breathe with a smile

    True love is to breathe
    Taste the air of lust
    Gasp at the longing
    Exhale pure desire

    Inhale exhale
    Respire suspire
    Breathe in tandem
    Breathe as one

  • #2
    I like the flow of this Jon. The way you've written it seems to match the cadence or natural rhythm of a resting pace of breathing, which makes it very easy to follow. Except for the third stanza, where your word choices perfectly upped the pace temporarily. I love the phrase 'breathe with a smile'. You know, every time I try that (although I don't always remember), it improves my mood almost instantly! Thank you. Reading this leaves me feeling happy - and smiling.

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  • #3
    This was a breath of fresh air!! Filled me with calm and happiness!! thank you Parkinsonspoet !

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    • #4
      Nicely structured and paced, Parkinsonspoet, and very musical.

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      • #5
        Hello Parkinsonspoet, A tender melody of the necesseties of life. Most enjoyable and lovey to read. Excellent! Regards, Tony.

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        • #6
          Nice Pp! Definitely need that oxygen in our body to oxygenate every single cell. People with apnea (breathing stops for about 20 seconds each breath cycle while asleep) are known to get decreased amount of oxygen when sleeping and end up tired when they awake. Body's being deprived of oxygen... and healing ( if wounded) slows when needed.

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          • #7
            Really Enjoyed P Poet, A new Fave of mine from you! Thank You!

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            • #8
              calming and lovely. i enjoyed this very much PP

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              • #9
                Beautiful. And so true!

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