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    My heart beats in organized fleet,
    Perfect timing in every beat.

    It's faster...lifted me to limerences
    Since you came to my senses!

    I will have to swear no pretenses.
    Presently...my future verb tenses!

    Keep doing what you do...
    To keep me from being blue!

    The amazing things you do...
    Will transport me to Xanadu!



  • #2
    I like the beat of your rhyme here imorogue - and 'limerences'??? - love it!

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    • imrogue
      imrogue commented
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      Thanks RLW! I'm glad you like it!

  • #3
    limerences... wonderful new word for me! imrogue I felt my heart speed up with this read!
    Keep doing what you do...
    To keep me from being blue!

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    • imrogue
      imrogue commented
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      Thanks Suz-zen! Sometimes a little speedy beat is good for the heart... lol .

    • AnatoliyS
      AnatoliyS commented
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      New word for me too, Suz-zen!

  • #4
    Beautifully done.

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    • imrogue
      imrogue commented
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      Thanks for reading and compliment —taking the time to comment!

  • #5
    Very interesting, fast-paced poem, imrogue ! I enjoyed it – thank you for sharing!

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