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    If I do not move
    Perhaps I will not be seen

    If I say nothing
    Perhaps I will not be heard

    If I do not think
    Perhaps I will not be here

    If I close my eyes
    Perhaps the world will disappear

  • #2
    And this is why I suck at warfare.

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    • imrogue
      imrogue commented
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      Hahaha RLW... I second the motion!

  • #3
    To be alone, or want to be alone, can be sad. Nice capturing of that feeling, Tanner.

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    • #4
      Beautiful written!

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      • #5
        RLW and imrogue, I didn't think of this as a war-game. M1sb is actually right. I was writing about a state of mind but obviously the poem had much greater implications.

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        • #6
          Gerryramona, Thank you for your positive comment. Much appreciated!

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          • #7
            Well done Tanner. There are certainly main levels to this poem. I feel sadness and hopelessness from it.

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