Camouflage

[Tanner]

If I do not move
Perhaps I will not be seen

If I say nothing
Perhaps I will not be heard

If I do not think
Perhaps I will not be here

If I close my eyes
Perhaps the world will disappear

[RhymeLovingWriter]

And this is why I suck at warfare.

[imrogue]

Hahaha RLW... I second the motion!

[Muttado1sb]

To be alone, or want to be alone, can be sad. Nice capturing of that feeling, Tanner.

[Gerryramona]

Beautiful written!

[Tanner]

RLW and imrogue, I didn't think of this as a war-game. M1sb is actually right. I was writing about a state of mind but obviously the poem had much greater implications.

[Tanner]

Gerryramona, Thank you for your positive comment. Much appreciated!

[Electron.John]

Well done Tanner. There are certainly main levels to this poem. I feel sadness and hopelessness from it.