Empty

[Gerryramona]

What I feel is empty cold
Like the ground I'm standing on.
Winter is here,
Still snow blanket
I see it in your eyes,
You freeze me with your touch,
Icy breath is cutting in my skin,
Now I am all covered in frost.

You aim towards new heights,
But still trying to count shooting stars,
When the horizont is blurred,
No more empty words
They are frozen vapours
Disguised in lies.

We've changed,
You and me, we are quite lost,
Patience is what I need,
Arguing is what you seek.
No more empty words
Frozen vapours can't reach me.

[Muttado1sb]

So sad, Gerryramona. To grow apart, or realize how different you are.

[Suz-zen]

I like this a lot Gerryramona
when I first read:
Like the ground I'm standing on.
Winter is here,
Still snow blanket
I see it in your eyes,

i was transported with the narrator right to :

No more empty words
Frozen vapours can't reach me.

[RhymeLovingWriter]

The way in which you wrote this really evokes the chill - I actually shivered a bit - thinking on how very desolate the scene appears. Excellent writing!

[Gerryramona]

Thank you for your kind comments!

[lunar glide]

excellent frozen imagery! really well done