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    For a long time
    I have secretly insisted
    that the moon and I
    have lived
    similar adventures
    but the truth is
    that we cry unlike tears.

    I hide my face
    and want a caress afterwards
    so that I might fall into the miraculous conjunction
    of absorbent loves
    and smile again.

    While the moon
    need not hide her face
    her tears are from another side
    inadmissible
    even to ​​​​loves auscultation.





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    Last edited by lunar glide; 12-28-2016, 09:13 PM.

  • #2
    Oh my lunar glide - this is really beautiful - and other worldly - and woven clearly as magnificently as is possible - this side of the moon. If any are near her ilk - you are among them - whatever small differences remain. 'The miraculous conjunction of absorbent loves'? Pure as silk my poet friend. YUM! Wish I could do multiple likes.

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    • lunar glide
      lunar glide commented
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      thank you RLW! now if I only had your courage for sonnets 😄

  • #3
    Auscultation - now there's a new word. And it is exactly the right word for its place.

    There is a lambent refinement about this piece that makes its underlying spur all the more poignant - that the beloved, though patently manifest, is deeply and inscrutably other.

    Sheer joy to read and recite.

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    • lunar glide
      lunar glide commented
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      sometimes i try to put in an unusual word and it doesn't always work. i am happy to know it did this time. thank you Grant

  • #4
    lunar glide

    I hide my face
    and want a caress afterwards
    so that I might fall into the miraculous conjunction
    of absorbent loves
    and smile again.

    You have made my heart swell.

    thank you.

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    • lunar glide
      lunar glide commented
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      I can't think of a greater compliment! thank you suz zen

  • #5
    Suz-zen thank you for directing me to this beautiful write. Be still my auscultating heart. You have a special niche with the night light lunar, keep it lit for us all!
    Last edited by Bobby Del Boy; 12-29-2016, 07:16 AM.

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    • lunar glide
      lunar glide commented
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      thank you Bobby! ill be thinking of your festivities over new years 😄
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