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    You want to say words
    but none seem appropriate
    so you stay silent

    And you offer peace
    A shoulder to lean against
    A hand to be held
    A presence to be there when
    quiet is most comforting

    There aren’t always words
    Sometimes what’s most important
    is just being there

  • #2
    It is a comforting poem--- Nice one! 😊

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    • Muttado1sb
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      Thank you, imrogue! That is all it was meant to be.

  • #3
    Another amen from me. And sometimes, presence it so much better than words. You nailed it - softly and kindly - but on the head.

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    • Muttado1sb
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      Thank you, RLW!

  • #4
    Beautiful written...Sometimes the presence doesn't need any additional words, it's suffice.

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    • Muttado1sb
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      Thank you, Gerryramona!

  • #5
    Wrapped in a warm cashmere blanket,sitting by a fireplace, this poem brings comfort and peace.

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    • #6
      Thank you, Bobby! That was what was meant.

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      • #7
        M1sb, Straightforward but eloquent. Your words flowed well and were well-rooted and branching out from the title.

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        • Muttado1sb
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          Thank you, Tanner! It was a very straight-forward subject for me. I'm glad you thought it eloquent.
          Last edited by Muttado1sb; 01-11-2017, 04:49 PM.

      • #8
        Eloquent and you are brothers.

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