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    To explode in you
    Is to truly let go of the mind

    In a cataclysm of joy
    Miraculously

    Squeezed back to the Planck era
    Where you meet the Angels

    Of pure light
    Waiting for the world to begin

    If allowed
    You would stay in this moment
    Last edited by Tanner; 12-24-2016, 01:01 PM.

  • #2
    Orgasm, People come and watch but do not leave their names. Perhaps they were expecting a different sort of event; not sexual congress that ended up in the company of Angels before the world begin. Quite a journey that you took me on, and well remembered.

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    • #3
      Tanner, Perhaps you need to write less explicit verse or maybe not post them.

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      • #4
        Well done! You certainly make your point. I like the use of "Planck era" instead of being of time.

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        • #5
          ElectronJohn, Thank you for commenting. Orgasm was getting lonely. Obviously, the intent of the poem was to focus on the intensity of the experience and where it led to.

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          • #6
            Saw the title and just had to read! Love it and I hope your partner had an equally good experience. There - brave enough to respond!

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            • #7
              mooneyblack, Thank you for your courage and in responding to this poem as the first woman. Much, much appreciated! I was beginning to think no one engaged in sexual activity on the Zone!

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