Lay Me In The Swaying Grass

[Odalisque]

Lay Me In the swaying grass
atop a dune of sand
where I can Hear
the crashing waves
and gaze up to the heavens.

Lay Me In the swaying grass
atop a dune of sand
Let the feel of wind
and you
be all I know
against my naked skin.

Lay Me In the swaying grass
atop a dune of sand
and I will whisper words of love to you
beneath the midnight blue

[RhymeLovingWriter]

Beautiful flow here Odalisque! Welcome to the zone!

[lunar glide]

this is a lovely sensuous plea! I think i have said this to myself silently before. kudos!

[Muttado1sb]

Lovely lines, Odalisque! Nice feel and flow, supporting well this, as lunar glide aptly put, very sensuous poem.

[imrogue]

Nice flow with a sensuous feel.

[DWAYNE]

This is a beautiful, delicate, sensual poem.
The chorus works well here!