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  • Lay Me In The Swaying Grass

    Lay Me In the swaying grass
    atop a dune of sand
    where I can Hear
    the crashing waves
    and gaze up to the heavens.

    Lay Me In the swaying grass
    atop a dune of sand
    Let the feel of wind
    and you
    be all I know
    against my naked skin.

    Lay Me In the swaying grass
    atop a dune of sand
    and I will whisper words of love to you
    beneath the midnight blue

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  • #2
    Beautiful flow here Odalisque! Welcome to the zone!

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    • #3
      this is a lovely sensuous plea! I think i have said this to myself silently before. kudos!

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      • #4
        Lovely lines, Odalisque! Nice feel and flow, supporting well this, as lunar glide aptly put, very sensuous poem.
        Last edited by Muttado1sb; 12-15-2016, 08:33 PM.

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        • #5
          Nice flow with a sensuous feel.

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          • #6
            This is a beautiful, delicate, sensual poem.
            The chorus works well here!

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