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    LOVERS

    We were opposite, far from real
    You followed then loved me here
    Accept my plea for forgiveness, it took me to long to follow you back
    It’s never easy in the winter finding food
    Leaving the pack, to feed on you, the love and life that you lack
    Tracing from the beginning
    Crouching to hide myself, this lonely desperate wolf
    Deep snow in god’s plan
    Crooked tempered hand, frozen
    Drawing
    One strait line
    Bending to touch end to end
    Creating a circle
    Letting go, selling for your Lust
    Never ending ring of forbidden trust
    Arch your back so I can pull you forward to thrust
    Intertwine
    We twist to kiss
    Tongues wet, sour we lick
    Seal an easy paper cut opening
    Moisten the glue to shut the envelops that hold the letters of love
    Written, forgotten words
    Let your jaws relax
    Tongue, Teeth pause
    Before the bite of the fruit
    Bitter taste of my truth in your mouth
    Neither commit
    The bed sheets become turbans around your feet
    Your senses release
    You fall back onto the short last autumn grass
    Late, late night you nearly hum, completely undone
    But you made me come
    Bedroom floor heated slate
    Far, far, far from any slum
    Not far from my asylum
    Eventually we all strum
    Lovers
    Of something
    We all become

    RDS
    THE SECOND

  • #2
    There is a lot here, The second, bouncing a lot of images in my head that all circle back with your ending, ''Lovers / Of something / We all become''

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    • #3
      Muttado, Thank You for the reply

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      • #4
        Strewth, the second! This is a beautifully raw and original image of lovers, woven strangely and musically, and making precise sense to the heart.

        Deep snow in god’s plan
        Crooked tempered hand, frozen
        Drawing
        One strait line
        Bending to touch end to end


        ​​​​​​​Gorgeous!

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        • #5
          Up the queue

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          • #6
            Grant you are always elegant in your reply's and I am greatly thankful and humbled! Truly! I just wanted send an apology To those who commented on my post before this one. I have a workmate that is also a close friend. He has become seriously ill. My mind has been other places lately. Thank You!!

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            • Suz-zen
              Suz-zen commented
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              I hope that your workmate is better....

          • #7
            I am catching up by hit and miss! And am delighted i hit on this!!
            The second !!

            I wish i had written this line:The bed sheets become turbans around your feet

            Brilliant!!!!!

            The entire piece...bravO~~

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            • #8

              Woah, this is surreal! I like! 😊


              One straight line
              Bending to touch end to end
              Creating a circle
              Letting go, selling for your Lust
              Never ending ring of forbidden trust
              Arch your back so I can pull you forward to thrust
              Intertwine
              We twist to kiss


              Not far from my asylum
              Eventually we all strum
              Lovers
              Of something
              We all become





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              • The second
                The second commented
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                coming back I thank you

            • #9
              Well written,vivid without being obvious, sex without clichés, smart work

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