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  • When I'm Better

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    Last edited by Bison; 12-10-2016, 03:38 PM.

  • #2
    A ramble-fest Bison - letting it flow and go as it comes. I don't know enough about poetry to comment on form with any kind of authority. As a reader - I love the rolling feel of these lines. So much motion. You are awake - and in the thick of it - and I think you should own it. I think you HAVE owned it. To me, that's a good thing.

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    • #3
      A rollicking roll down the frustration path looking for a good exit. I hope you find it, Bison. This was a good stop on the way.

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      • #4
        A rather rough self-reflection we all go through with more or less unnerving frequency. A universal, relatable write, Bison

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