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  • Suz-zen
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    The second thankfully i have not. I have however know a few that have, sadly still do.

  • The second
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    P Poet, Salute!!!!!

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  • Parkinsonspoet
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    Your diescribe this so well.and have constructed an excellent verse I raise a glass to you

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  • The second
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    Never a sober ending. Thank You!!!!!

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  • AnatoliyS
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    As if you are praying like a Monk
    Stuttering, slurring
    In your temple of meditation now
    Again drunk
    I love this ending. Unfortunately, I know how it goes from first-hand experience. A great story painted here, The second!

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  • The second
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    I hope you have never prayed in that temple Suz-zen!. "The monk bought lunch" "ya he bought a little" Thank You!!!!

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  • Suz-zen
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    The second missed this one before.... love this part: As if you are praying like a Monk
    Stuttering, slurring
    In your temple of meditation now

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  • Tony Grannell
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    I jest you not, grant, when I say, two poets a sat the counter in the merriment of Guinness and the poetry of conversation would be, without doubt, my idea of heaven. So engrossed would we be, that no man would dare make trespass on our pronouncements. That's a great expression, 'shout you a schooner', it's a powerful offer. A hearty sláinte to you too - and one more for the road!

  • docstorm
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    This reminds me of the famous morning after statement.................."OOoohh! My aching head,...never again!"


    Nice one, enjoyed the read.

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  • The second
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    Thank You MHenry

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  • MHenry
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    Very effective, Ts. A perfect vignette!

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  • grant hayes
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    Ah, a Guinness-and-poetry man, and Irish too! I'd love to shout you a schooner of the dark brew, Tony, and talk and talk on barstools. Sláinte!

  • Tony Grannell
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    Hello The second, Teardrops in my Guinness and poetry on the mind. I have often been the barstool monk and come the sobering morning; the fool. Once again an excellent and keenly observed passage of poetry. Well done. Bottoms up, Tony.

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  • Muttado1sb
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    Quite the description of too many I know. But I prefer to read it than to see it. Well described and poetically put, The second!

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  • RhymeLovingWriter
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    What a picture you paint here TS - very effective - very affecting - leaves me with a sense of futility for those about whom you've woven this fine verse. I like the way you put this together.

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