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    MY FATHER ASKED

    My father asked
    How can I help you if you cannot listen?
    My answer
    I listen but cannot hear you
    My father asked
    How can I guide you if you cannot see?
    My answer
    I see but do not look
    My father asked
    How can I show you if you cannot love?
    I love you but do not feel
    My father said
    I cannot help you
    If you can’t listen to hear the truth
    If you can’t look to see the light
    If you can’t feel my love to give
    Then my father said
    Until you learn
    I will never go away

    RDS
    THE SECOND




  • #2
    wow ! the simple ending of this one touched me deeply. amazing work

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      Thank You LG Hope You had good Holiday!!!!!

  • #3
    The second I would hope Father will stay after I listen, see, hear and love. Please stay Father...You are consistently awesome TS!

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    • The second
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      BDB Thank You MOTF. He said he would

  • #4
    This has the wisdom of a proverb.

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    • The second
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      Mr hayes as always, you shedding your wisdom on my stuff! I do listen!! Thank You

  • #5
    And even then...how wonderfully comforting TS.

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    • The second
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      Thank You RLW!!!! I do hope for comfort in the end

  • #6
    As Grant said, this does sound like a proverb. And I hope would hope you never learn enough for your father to feel he can go away. Very nice, The second.

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    • #7
      This piece is very reminiscent of Cat Stevens Father and Son. Very enjoyable, Ts.

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