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    Baby
    all Miss ever had wanted
    But now all her love is drained
    Her heart haunted
    9 months just to wake up and say
    Goodbye.
    Even if everything had went well,
    She'd still have the guilt of bringing baby home to this hell
    Where baby would fall asleep to the sound of whiskey lullabies...

    Miss was passed out
    in the midst of plastic toys scattered around
    So high, I thought she would never come down.
    Nothing could save her now...

    (Yet another unfinished poem, but expect it to be later. This one has a obvious plot, but a deeper meaning melted in. 💕)












  • #2
    A great start with a mixture of freshness and maturity. I look forward to the finished piece

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    • #3
      Thanks! I appreciate the comment 💕 It should be finished possibly tomorrow.

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      • #4
        Devastatingly powerful piece!!! For me it was finished!! Thank you! I hope for you it was fiction?

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        • #5
          You write of the raw sadness of life OWA in great style. I too, will look for the finish you indicate is still coming on this one.

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          • #6
            This has the feel of something that will lead to a very tragic ending.

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