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  • For the supermoon and the night

    Tonight two infinite magnates
    share the night:
    the darkness
    and the super moon!

    Tonight the night's solitude
    becomes a pearl
    ​​​the size of our love (measured between our fingers)
    and the darkness shivers
    in the honest coquetry
    that beats and expands modestly
    ad inf. for a moment.

    A moment!
    where all that will be felt
    is the togetherness
    of our eyes and the white moon
    eroding the thin bars of our birdcages
    our eyelashes
    floating like the pine needles or leaves
    that cover meadows before winter.
    Last edited by lunar glide; 11-14-2016, 10:31 AM.

  • #2
    you are our lunar poet master and this keeps your standard high-a beautiful piece that reflects the beauty of the moon

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      lunar glide commented
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      thank you PP! your visit and comments is truly appreciated

  • #3
    One of your absolute brightest in the annals of lunar poetry LG! I like all of it, but that last stanza is exquisite in phrasing and imagery! Kudos!

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      lunar glide commented
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      I have been out of the poetic zone recently but surprisingly happy with this! I was unsure. your support means so much!

  • #4
    This is perhaps among the most beautiful poems I have ever had the pleasure to read. It is transcendent.

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      lunar glide commented
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      Thank you for saying so rhymetime! deservedly or not your praise makes me smile.

  • #5
    Limpid lunar lyrical lushness

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    • lunar glide
      lunar glide commented
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      thank you GH! I'm pleased to have inspired this string of compliments beginning with the letter l.

  • #6
    Lunar as only lunar can. Super moon and a super write.

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      lunar glide commented
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      Thank you Bobby! even when I can't you know I will try

  • #7
    This beauty is shaped like a deliciously ripe pear, lg! While every bite is magnificent, the bottom of the pear/poem contains the mother lode!

    floating like the pine needles or leaves
    that cover meadows before winter.


    This pair has the feel of poetic immortality!
    Last edited by MHenry; 11-17-2016, 08:20 PM.

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    • lunar glide
      lunar glide commented
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      I have always loved the shape of pears! the spark of creativity and imagination even in your comments is always inspiring to me.

  • #8

    Tonight the night's solitude
    becomes a pearl
    ​​​the size of our love (measured between our fingers)

    Superb!! lunar glide !! LOVE!!

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      lunar glide commented
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      thank you Suz-zen. I appreciate your visit!
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