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  • YOU>ME<MOON

    YOU>ME<MOON

    Tide with gravitational strings
    A continuous rhythmic lap
    Over and over
    Again and again
    Release, pull
    Release, pull
    Hypnotic shimmering, silky foam, salty waves
    Reappear when your phase is full

    Slivers of silver waning
    The stars out there, are they beside?
    On rare occasion, you pretend to be shy
    Hovering in your unconscious wealthy vacuum
    Murky, deepest blue, dusky hue
    With your light gone, my world askew
    Your rings of rainbows in the lofty unseen mist
    Disappear when your faze is new

    Never ending cycle
    Restarting soon
    Day
    Night
    You
    Me
    Moon

    RDS
    THE SECOND



  • #2
    Love the motion you've written into this TS!

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    • #3
      Thank you RLW Hope you enjoyed!!

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      • #4
        Such a feast of imagery and sensation.

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          Welcome Mr. Hayes! Welcome to my moment. Thank you!!!!!!!!!!!!!

      • #5
        A solemn and beautiful piece, TS. The moon helps us know we are alive and secretly does unknown and unimaginable things to us and our planet.

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        • #6
          Hello Mr H, Thank You for the Reply!!!!!!!!!!

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