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    You Choose (Micro-poem)

    I would not
    lose the Light
    any more than
    you would stop
    dancing with the dark

    it’s always been a choice

    and baby...it’s real

  • #2
    R.L.W. I will never stop dancing even though I can't dance but your light and dark are real!! Oh baby their real. So right now I choose you!!!Micro is good!!!!!!!!!

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    • RhymeLovingWriter
      RhymeLovingWriter commented
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      LOL...TS - thanks for the enthusiastic response! Glad you liked it.

  • #3
    I really appreciate this micro ultimatum. No judgement just a choice with a strongly implied consequence. Great!!!

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    • RhymeLovingWriter
      RhymeLovingWriter commented
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      Thanks rhymetime for taking a look and leaving a like and comment!

  • #4
    Yes indeed, be wary of them dark-dancers, always tread lightly on the light. A succinctly delightful passage of meaningful verse and finished off with a petite cherry of humour - "and baby...it's real." A wise proclamation and so neatly scribed. Much praise for this verse. Regards, Tony.

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    • RhymeLovingWriter
      RhymeLovingWriter commented
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      Thanks TG. I don't do much micro-poetry, but every once in awhile something pops up. Thank you for the like and taking time to leave a comment!

  • #5
    its always an act of faith and a beautiful write from you!

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    • RhymeLovingWriter
      RhymeLovingWriter commented
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      Thanks LG. Acts of faith do attract me - that's true. Glad you enjoyed it - thanks for letting me know!
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