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    Words
    Where are the words
    I want to be heard
    Cursed with a sharp mind
    I want to rewind
    I want to be heard
    Where are the words
    Words

    Tried
    Tongue tied
    Chance has just died
    To impress the girl
    I mumble lips curl
    Chance has just died
    Tongue tied
    Tried

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    My heart sank
    Overdrawn at wit bank
    First impession and last
    Now the die is cast
    Overdrawn at wit bank
    My heart sank
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    Words
    Where are the words
    I want to be heard
    Cursed with a sharp mind
    I want to rewind
    I want to be heard
    Where are the words
    Words

    Words


  • #2
    Such a different structure that works so well – I think I am getting into inspiration mode!
    Words
    Where are the words
    I want to be heard
    Cursed with a sharp mind
    I want to rewind
    Great poem! Thank you for sharing.

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    • Parkinsonspoet
      Parkinsonspoet commented
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      Thank you I find structure a useful toolthat opens up more possiblities

  • #3
    New - invigorating - and perfectly chosen for the frustrated possibilities you are expressing. The repetition reinforces the meaning and creates a pulsing rhythm that drives the point home. I like this style and structure Parkinsonspoet - let's have more please! Bravo!

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    • Parkinsonspoet
      Parkinsonspoet commented
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      Thank you I am glad you like it
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