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  • Milk (Haiku)

    Does a body good
    When spoiled, becomes rotten
    Your attitude stinks......

  • #2
    You hit the nail on the head here Poemahontas - sour milk will do that to a person. I'm wondering if you meant to infer a different use of 'spoiled' and 'rotten' - because they go together sometimes when talking about young children still learning manners. Or am I way off base there?

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    • #3
      Excellent observation.....I had kids and people in mind, people/person does a body good, kids you can spoil them rotten, and spoiled/rotten milk it stinks..... Thank you RLW

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