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    Fall to Spring

    Once the trees crowning glory
    Fall, my cars Autumn garnish
    Scattering swirling away as I pull out
    Returning to earth to nourish the land

    Under my feet a carpet of crunch
    Rustling sound as my shoes soft scrunch
    Subtle brown and amber hue
    Glisten with the morning dew

    Trees bare boughs dance in the wind
    Silently mime as they swing and sway
    Prepared for winters rites of passage
    Foliage resumes in springs bright hope
    Last edited by Parkinsonspoet; 10-28-2016, 07:12 PM.

  • #2
    'Carpet of crunch'???? Delightful!!! I love it!


    • Parkinsonspoet
      Parkinsonspoet commented
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      inspired by one of your poems

    • RhymeLovingWriter
      RhymeLovingWriter commented
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      Yes, change of seasons is definitely in the air - even in the rhymezone!

  • #3
    Filled with many s sounds, a few c's and a middle of the poem aabb rhyme scheme. Autumn garnish ... to nourish the land. A cornucopia of poetic devices. Very enjoyable, Pp!


    • Parkinsonspoet
      Parkinsonspoet commented
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      I am always pleased to receive your encouragement thank you

  • #4
    great fall poem pp! it even has a nice beat to match the imagery and rhymes. love it.


    • #5
      yes much enjoyable p poet


      • #6
        This poem is both visceral and metaphoric.

        Several dancing, rhythmic phrases.

        Great write!