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  • Get-Go

    So many players against us
    Right from the get-go, baby
    Right from the get-go

    Strangers claiming to know us
    Claiming to be in-the-know, baby
    Claiming to be in-the-know

    Margaritaceous hearts betray us
    Taking it blow-by-blow, baby
    Taking it blow-by-blow

    We stand in shadows before us
    Keeping it on the down-low, baby
    Keeping it on the down-low

    Stolen kisses between us
    Going-with-the-flow, baby
    Going-with-the-flow

  • #2
    Nice! Do I hear music?

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    • Sister Greed
      Sister Greed commented
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      If you do, feel free to write it! Not my forte...

    • Pyro
      Pyro commented
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      Mine neither (but how I wish it was), I usually just make noise

  • #3
    This did have me hearing a wicked bass line baby. Really good!!!

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    • #4
      Hi, Sister Greed! As I read this, I also thought you were writing a song! And it reminds me of an early 60's song by Gene Pitney - Town Without Pity, but taken into the 21st century! Thanks for sharing!

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      • #5
        While MHenry hears "Town Without Pity" I hear "Westside Story".
        The more of your work I read the more I want to read .
        This is really good

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        • Sister Greed
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          Thank you, rhymetime!
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