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    Tonight, through my window,
    a glimpse of your silvery light
    dawned upon the grassy
    fill of this earth.
    Your quaintness
    brought serenity
    and wonderment...
    enticed me to partake
    in this nature 's whimsical event.
    So, I lay in a pool of bubbling water...
    then, soaked you up to my contentment.




    Inspired by Lunar glide's 'To the Full Harvest Moon'
    Last edited by imrogue; 09-16-2016, 08:45 PM.

  • #2
    beautiful! 😄

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    • imrogue
      imrogue commented
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      Thanks, lunar glide!

  • #3
    This harvest moon has captured the attention of many poets in the zone! Beautifully done, imrogue.

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    • imrogue
      imrogue commented
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      thanks,RLW!

  • #4
    GG

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    • #5
      It's usually always the smaller things which catch my eye, and the use of 'dawned' certainly did here; it's a very choice way of describing light, particularly in this context, as it attributes qualities of the sun at morning to the moon at night. On similar lines the speaker soaking up said light was a nice image to conclude, a moonlight soak in a Jacuzzi sounds like an enjoyable way to embrace the night!

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      • imrogue
        imrogue commented
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        thank you for reading and taking the time to comment. :-)

    • #6
      There's such a relaxing romantic feel to this imrogue. Beautiful!

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      • imrogue
        imrogue commented
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        thank you AtL :-)
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