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    The caveat is expanding
    chasm in the mountain—
    where raging lava
    forging through
    to freedom.
    Ocean waves
    awaiting
    below
    with
    cooling
    embrace
    to appease
    the burning fire—

  • #2
    Beautiful write imrogue! I don't know if you mean it to be literal or metaphorical - which makes me like it even more!

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    • imrogue
      imrogue commented
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      Purely metaphorical RLW! 😊 Thanks for reading! I miss you guys! Been too busy to peruse beautiful poems in the zone.

  • #3
    REALLY enjoyed this imrogue And the vision of your words looks just like a wave!! By design??

    Favorite:

    Ocean waves
    awaiting
    below
    with
    cooling
    embrace

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    • imrogue
      imrogue commented
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      Thanks for reading Suz-zen!

  • #4
    Sounds like ecstasy. Just beautiful IMR!

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    • imrogue
      imrogue commented
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      Thank you!

  • #5
    Very direct and strong conjuration of fire and water, imrogue. Welcome back!

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    • imrogue
      imrogue commented
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      Thank you Grant!

  • #6
    oh yes happy you are back! 😄

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    • imrogue
      imrogue commented
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      Hello Lunar guide! glad to be back! :-)

  • #7
    Very tactile and concise. I love it. My kind of poem!

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    • imrogue
      imrogue commented
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      Thanks for reading and for loving it! :-)

  • #8
    Well writen and imaginative thank you for sharing

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    • imrogue
      imrogue commented
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      Thanks for reading and for your nice comment! :-)
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