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  • RhymeLovingWriter
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    Oooo...I really like the 'feel' of this MHenry. It speaks anticipation, and possibly disappointment, in the same breath. And it's relational - relational poems most always move me. You do a nice job with all things lunar.

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  • MHenry
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    Half Moon

    Half Moon

    This evening, I saw a pale gibbous moon
    With just the faintest hint of something more
    It was much like the way you’ve been lately
    Except, eventually, the moon became full
    Last edited by MHenry; 08-27-2016, 03:48 PM. Reason: I'd half a mind to change the first line, and a fellow poet helped convince the other half. Thank you, fellow poet!
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