Thank you for the visit, Sensei.
Yes, Tanner has influenced my writing in general, as have you and others.
The Asian Queen escaped carnage only because I could not find my machete before I finished this piece!
Suz-zen also influenced this particular poem with her...
shy sky haiku (inspired by lunar glide comment)
08-26-2016, 11:10 AM
Shy sky, naked dusk
Disrobes to reveal yellow
No longer feels blue
so I guess I was directly and indirectly influenced by lunar glide, too!
In the end though, the whole poem only works because of the scoops!
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The sensibility is quite Tanneresque. So lyrical, MHenry. And no one died!
Cool black scoops of moon
Oo oo oo, love that.
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Hi, Suz-zen, it's nice to see you in the moon ice cream parlor!
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I agree with Alex! 'cool black scoops of moon' really stopped me!! I wanted some!
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MHenry, Oxymoron and paean well ascribed. I think the Moon is the most blessed celestial orb on the Zone and we know who to blame!
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Thank you, AG! I like cool black scoops of moon, too. Licorice Ice Cream, I think! Yum!
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I like cool black scoops of moon - as though it was some delicious new type of ice cream. Very sensual.
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'floating in poetry heaven' - great title for a poem, don't you guys think?
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Thank you, moonwalker! I wrote this earlier today as a haiku, but was not satisfied. We had a power outage at the office just before closing time, so I came home early and rewrote this as a tanka, with which I am much more pleased.
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woah. I must say the zone seems more inspired and beautiful than ever. this write has me floating in poetry heaven grandmaestro.
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Tanka time - haunting tanka time - I like the word 'exotic' - and a bit of mystery is nice too. Nice write MHenry.
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Black Moon
Black Moon
Cool black scoops of moon
Dark caves in a yellow sky
Your hypnotic orbs
My exotic Asian Queen
Mysterious night Goddess
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