Empathy

[Parkinsonspoet]

The pink sky at Sunset
Blushes with empathy
As lovers hold hands

[RhymeLovingWriter]

Sweetness.

[AlexandratheLate]

This is sweet Pp. Lovely. :-)

[lunar glide]

oh wow. so beautiful PP!

[MHenry]

An image for the ages, Pp

[Parkinsonspoet]

Thank you all . This was going to be a longer poem but I said it all in three linesso felt it was better like that,

[MHenry]

It's good to know when a poem is done!

[Tanner]

PP, this Non-Haiku has the great Japanese Haiku artists filled with jealousy of this offering.

[RhymeLovingWriter]

You know Parkinsonspoet - this is neither here nor there, but if you did want to make it a haiku (since it's so very close), all you'd need to do is take out 'the' on the first line, and add a one syllable word of your choice after 'brushes' (i.e. brushes soft, bright, bold - however you want to modify it) and you would have a haiku format.

I like it just the way it is - but Tanner's comment got me thinking. Just my two cents (which with inflation is worth more like 1/2 cent.)

[Parkinsonspoet]

Thank you for that it is helpful. I did not focus on format but liked my content-I will fiddle to see what could be but here I will leave it as it is.