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  • Suz-zen
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    I am grateful that you have taken your time to read and comment rhymetime. i admire your work and the way you see the world!

  • rhymetime
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    Fantastic verse. I love the imagery and the depth you present with such simple well organized words.

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  • Suz-zen
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    thank you Alexandra... vulnerability has a delicateness that at times can leave the blues behind.

  • AlexandratheLate
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    Nice take on this SuzZen. I saw it as willing to be vulnerable.

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  • Suz-zen
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    thanks!!! very thoughtful of you to come back!

  • BiocideJ
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    Originally posted by BiocideJ View Post
    I had a sneaking suspicion I'd see something from that comment. I was thinking along the lines of the sky blushing pink being unrobed so.
    I just realized I never actually complimented how good this poem was.

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  • Suz-zen
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    thank you MH!

  • Suz-zen
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    without you...no haiku...

  • lunar glide
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    I'm beyond honored with this suz-zen. for you sky purses her lips red 😄

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  • MHenry
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    Outstanding, Suz-zen! Absolutely love this!

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  • Suz-zen
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    that is good too @BiocidJ. I want to see LG's ...

  • BiocideJ
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    I had a sneaking suspicion I'd see something from that comment. I was thinking along the lines of the sky blushing pink being unrobed so.

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  • Suz-zen
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    shy sky haiku (inspired by lunar glide comment)


    Shy sky, naked dusk
    Disrobes to reveal yellow
    No longer feels blue
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