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    Luna moth, your life is lived in brevity
    Each stage a struggle striving to renew
    Filled with wonderment and complexity
    Emerging from your cocoon as you pass through
    Last edited by AlexandratheLate; 08-26-2016, 02:49 PM.

  • #2
    AtL, Lovely and succinct, and most exquisite in its brevity!

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    • #3
      Thank you very much Tanner. I appreciate your comment. Looks like LG and I were on the same wavelength.

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      • #4
        Another moth inspired work of beauty. This is shorter than your usual fare AtL. You do well with any length!

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        • AlexandratheLate
          AlexandratheLate commented
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          Thank you very much RLW. I have more in mind for this one if I finish it. Thank you for the encouragement. :-).

      • #5
        Thank you SuzZen for the like.

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        • #6
          Very reflective and a metaphor for all our lives. Beautiful, AG!

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          • AlexandratheLate
            AlexandratheLate commented
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            Like it better. Thank you MH. :-)

        • #7
          Thank you very much MH. I'm adding more stanzas and glad to jump on the band wagon for the moth.

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          • #8
            we often weave from the same thread

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            • #9
              Yes LG but in your part about the wings is simply stunning. Wish I had thought of that. :-)

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              • #10
                Thank you very much Grant.

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