Announcement

Collapse
No announcement yet.

celestial navigation (inspired by grant hayes - sill)

Collapse
X
 
  • Filter
  • Time
  • Show
Clear All
new posts

  • celestial navigation (inspired by grant hayes - sill)



    ornate moth circles
    artificial light attracts
    destiny; plummet




  • #2
    This is something fascinating to watch. I haven't seen it in ages. Finely crafted haiku, Suz-zen!

    Comment


  • #3
    I smiled when I read this.

    Then I felt bad because I smiled at a moth's death.
    ​​​​​​

    Comment


    • Suz-zen
      Suz-zen commented
      Editing a comment
      thx BiocideJ! a good lesson =a smile

  • #4
    Poet, there is
    authentic light
    for burning in,
    a light that's kind,
    ferocious, and
    precisely wild.

    Comment


    • Suz-zen
      Suz-zen commented
      Editing a comment
      where is the place to click LOVE?! Grant, because i do love this!

    • RhymeLovingWriter
      RhymeLovingWriter commented
      Editing a comment
      'precisely wild' ... Oh yes, let's go there, that appeals.
Working...
X