celestial navigation (inspired by grant hayes - sill)

[Suz-zen]

^{ornate moth circles
artificial light attracts
destiny; plummet}

[MHenry]

This is something fascinating to watch. I haven't seen it in ages. Finely crafted haiku, Suz-zen!

[Suz-zen]

thank you MHenry

[BiocideJ]

I smiled when I read this.

Then I felt bad because I smiled at a moth's death.

[Suz-zen]

thx BiocideJ! a good lesson =a smile

[grant hayes]

Poet, there is
authentic light
for burning in,
a light that's kind,
ferocious, and
precisely wild.

[Suz-zen]

where is the place to click LOVE?! Grant, because i do love this!

[RhymeLovingWriter]

'precisely wild' ... Oh yes, let's go there, that appeals.