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  • grant hayes
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    Unusual from you, this lyrical turn, Dwayne; and finely said, too. Your forays into rhyme are opening up fresh paths.

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  • Suz-zen
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    DWAYNE

    restless soul... the owl...life in captions...loving you.

    this
    is
    gorgeous

    thank you!

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  • MHenry
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    Well constructed and poetic reflection on remembrance of things past, Dwayne!

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  • AlexandratheLate
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    Ahhhh. This touched me. It's simply beautiful.

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  • RhymeLovingWriter
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    Beautiful sentiment Dwayne.

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  • DWAYNE
    started a topic Zenith of Blessing

    Zenith of Blessing

    When at last
    my restless soul
    shall take its final flight.
    When left for me
    the setting sun,
    the owl song of night.
    And contemplation
    turns the mind
    to triumph
    and regret,
    of arrows spun
    to errant mark
    and wither targets met.
    When life
    appears to me
    in captions,
    recollected
    false and true,
    pronounce
    the zenith of my blessings
    was reached
    by loving you.
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