Zenith of Blessing

[DWAYNE]

When at last
my restless soul
shall take its final flight.
When left for me
the setting sun,
the owl song of night.
And contemplation
turns the mind
to triumph
and regret,
of arrows spun
to errant mark
and wither targets met.
When life
appears to me
in captions,
recollected
false and true,
pronounce
the zenith of my blessings
was reached
by loving you.

[RhymeLovingWriter]

Beautiful sentiment Dwayne.

[AlexandratheLate]

Ahhhh. This touched me. It's simply beautiful.

[MHenry]

Well constructed and poetic reflection on remembrance of things past, Dwayne!

[Suz-zen]

DWAYNE

restless soul... the owl...life in captions...loving you.

this
is
gorgeous

thank you!

[grant hayes]

Unusual from you, this lyrical turn, Dwayne; and finely said, too. Your forays into rhyme are opening up fresh paths.