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  • For the full sturgeon moon, the moon when all things ripen.

    Seeds and sturgeon
    searched in darkness
    awaiting tonight's truthful moment
    in the most truthful season
    the summer.

    (The most truthful season because
    it is when things ripen
    when invisible interiors
    go out as far as they can go.)

    Tonight seed and fish and fruit
    and good souls
    have finished mixing with themselves
    to share with the outside
    to mingle until
    even your haze turns red
    in a celestial compote
    from a single womb
    in enjoyment of a moment
    when omniscience is shared
    by all living things
    and all energy
    belongs to love.

    we are love tonight, our moon.
    Last edited by lunar glide; 08-19-2016, 01:55 PM.

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    (The most truthful season because
    it is when things ripen
    when invisible interiors
    go out as far as they can go.)

    Great line!

    Really, the whole thing is a poetic gem.

    What a vivid, apt description of spawning, as metaphor for truth!

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    • lunar glide
      lunar glide commented
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      thank you Dwayne! I'm happy you liked it.

  • #3
    This is so enchantingly poetic, lg, and the juxtaposition of the cosmos with the mating ritual of all living things in one crimson, celestial brew under a harvest moon heightens the poesy of this lovely piece immeasurably.

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    • lunar glide
      lunar glide commented
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      thank you maestro your comments are truly appreciated.

  • #4
    LG - you master of moon verse- this is beautiful! Looking forward to this moon - my appreciation has grown since I've been reading your writings.

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    • lunar glide
      lunar glide commented
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      I am overjoyed RLW. in a way this could be the purest purpose of poetry, you have expressed it here: to write so readers see a subject through different eyes. thank you for your goodness.

  • #5
    Oh my! From first to last, a masterpiece.

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    • lunar glide
      lunar glide commented
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      I'm honored by such kudos Grant. thank you!

  • #6
    Quite exquisite LG. I love the feeling this evokes like good friend and family with good wine and good food - what more could anyone ask for? And then the glorious moon.

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    • #7
      that it brought you those good feelings makes me glad ATL. Thank you!

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      • #8
        "Keeper of the Moon" has left me mesmerized in her reflective glowing tribute to the nightlight! Love it Lunar!

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        • #9
          thank you bobby!

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