A Warm Winter Day

[MHenry]

Melting icicles
Echo in metal buckets
Waking the roosters

[grant hayes]

Haiku in form and sensibility; plus, there is a understated musicality: melting/metal, the endings of metal and icicles, melting/echo/metal assonance, the endings of melting and waking.....a masterful gem and a really lovely observation. Hat's off to the Maestro!

[MHenry]

Thank you for your careful evaluation, grant, Sensei. I felt certain you would notice the poetic devices at work here, and I am pleased you did. As you might recall, you previously educated me to the importance and usefulness of using such poetic devices whenever it might enhance the piece. As a result of your guidance, whenever I write I pay more attention to this.

[RhymeLovingWriter]

I love the sound and idea of this MHenry! It's a beauty.

[MHenry]

Thanks, RLW!

[lunar glide]

wooo yes. love it!

[MHenry]

Thanks, lg!

[AlexandratheLate]

Nice use of poetic devices and wonderful lines. Many likes MH.

[MHenry]

Thank you, AG!