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  • MHenry
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    Thank you, AG!

  • AlexandratheLate
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    Nice use of poetic devices and wonderful lines. Many likes MH.

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  • MHenry
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    Thanks, lg!

  • lunar glide
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    wooo yes. love it!

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  • MHenry
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    Thanks, RLW!

  • RhymeLovingWriter
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    I love the sound and idea of this MHenry! It's a beauty.

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  • MHenry
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    Thank you for your careful evaluation, grant, Sensei. I felt certain you would notice the poetic devices at work here, and I am pleased you did. As you might recall, you previously educated me to the importance and usefulness of using such poetic devices whenever it might enhance the piece. As a result of your guidance, whenever I write I pay more attention to this.

  • grant hayes
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    Haiku in form and sensibility; plus, there is a understated musicality: melting/metal, the endings of metal and icicles, melting/echo/metal assonance, the endings of melting and waking.....a masterful gem and a really lovely observation. Hat's off to the Maestro!

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  • MHenry
    started a topic A Warm Winter Day

    A Warm Winter Day

    Melting icicles
    Echo in metal buckets
    Waking the roosters

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