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    ...Speak to us
    as if we're half awake
    not as if we depend on you
    or are born from the bonfire in your chest
    long ago withdrawn.

    Tell us of ourselves
    if you wish us to reach other
    not walking backwards
    across your tranquilizing plagarisms
    and tepid epiphanies
    lulling false truces to sleep
    to awaken tomorrow
    refreshed.

    See us from our eyes
    if you dare watch hope rush out
    after your game of chance election
    waiting to swap you out again
    no matter how you change your hair
    or stealthily you smile.



  • #2
    Orange hair with much despair, the walls around you should keep you there! I

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    • lunar glide
      lunar glide commented
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      lol thank you! took me a second

  • #3
    Love it Lunar!

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    • #4
      Truly wonderful LG. Just love this beautiful truth and your weaving it.

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      • lunar glide
        lunar glide commented
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        thank you. I appreciate your reading and liking 😄

    • #5
      You know - I do sometimes wonder who they are talking to...or who they THINK they are talking to. Very astute write LG.

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      • lunar glide
        lunar glide commented
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        exactly! I'm happy you know the feeling...

    • #6
      Biting commentary poetically told, lg, in your signature style, pure and delicious!

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      • lunar glide
        lunar glide commented
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        I'm glad the venture into politics was a pleasant surprise.

    • #7
      Oh I do love this!!

      Eloquent outrage and plea, my heart and mind feast upon this.

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      • lunar glide
        lunar glide commented
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        I'm so glad you of all writers liked this. 😄

    • #8
      You have glided assuredly from the personal-cosmic-lyrical to the prophetic. Thank you for granting us this arrow of beautiful admonition.

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      • lunar glide
        lunar glide commented
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        what kind of a poet is afraid to tackle politicians? I'm glad it still glided and always honored by your visit.

    • #9
      Well thought and presented as usual. I really enjoyed this political commentary.

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      • lunar glide
        lunar glide commented
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        thank you! your visit and comment is kind and appreciated.

    • #10
      LG, I am very worried that the Talking Head of Orange Hair is a Reality Show magnet in the process of collecting riffraff, bottom feeders, effluvia and is speaking to the worst fears in people. I am afraid that sanity itself and the well-being of society and the world is at stake. Your warning is well-taken. Bobby's comment is dead-on!

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      • lunar glide
        lunar glide commented
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        exactly! we are in trouble

    • #11
      I hope enough of us can unite to stop him...

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