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    Pyro
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    Thank you Tanner!
  • Pyro
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    Thanks rhymetime! And you're welcome - I think
  • Tanner
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    Pyro, I used to experience night terrors. Your write is highly graphic and descriptive, with insightful imagery.

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  • rhymetime
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    I still experience night terrors. this verse so perfectly and insidiously describes the absolute and incredible fear.

    Thank you - I think

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  • Pyro
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    Thanks AtL!
  • AlexandratheLate
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    This is outstanding Pyro! I used to suffer from night terrors and you nailed the imagery, the feelings. Welcome and great poem!!

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  • Suz-zen
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    oh yes this was a success!
  • Pyro
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    How intriguingly daunting!
  • MHenry
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    I cannot say what demons lurk, but I would wager there is a better than even chance one of your upcoming posts will elucidate.
  • Pyro
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    O dear!
    The horrors of writing poetry?
    What demons are lurking around the corner?
  • MHenry
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    Engaging and well written nightmare, Pyro.
    I can relate especially to this line, which accurately describes a sensation I experience in many of my unsettling nightmares...
    I cannot hear my feeble calling

    As terrible as nightmares are, they cannot compare with the horrors of war, rape, famine, terrorism, disease, and writing poetry.

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  • Pyro
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    And I am thrilled that you do GH. Thank you for your kind words!
  • grant hayes
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    As a witching hour horror-magnet, I appreciate this dramatic and well wrought exploration, Pyro.

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  • Pyro
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    Hooray! Sorry!
    It means that I've succeded in a way. I suffer night terrors too, but really weird ones, no resemblence to this.
    I was afraid it had become tedious.
  • Suz-zen
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    NOOOOOOOOO!! From someone who suffered from night terrors this was difficult to read! Too good a write
    Pyro
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    Pyro Now i must look away!

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